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First travels were difficult, much expensive and very dangerous.Today is all easier.We could travel with plain, bus, our own car,
ship or train.Nawadays is a lot of travel angencis and travel at moderate prices, it is more and more payment advantages, because of competition between agencis.Travels are not so dangerous as in past, unless we travel to state where is war or some another generally known dangers.
People travel for many different reasons.Someone wanted a change,rest,learn foreign language or make a lot of money.
If we travel we meet a lot of new people, we eate unusualn food, recognize difference civilization and so on.
I think Slovenia are the most
atended Bled, Bohinj, Šobec, Čateške , Dolenjske toplice, for turists is point of interest Ljubljana, because is the capital tawn in Slovenia.Of course is very important what visitor tu Slovenia would like to see.
The most population places in the world are Mediterranean, Alps,American national parks, In Paris Notre Dame, Venice, Hawai
and so on.
All people have own dreams, so I would like to spand my holidays in Hawaii or in Egipt.
Peoples who travels are usually disagree with dirty bathroom and survey.All want hotels with parking area, air conditioning, tatesfull and big meals.I thing that we are very demanding.We coud not to exspect brilliance for a little money, but if we pay a lot it is normal that we demand from hotels and agencis all the best.

sasa 1. d

daj v Word pa ti bo pregledal, ker je mal veliko!

lp ajs

Nekaj sem ti popravila, nisem pa 100% prepričana da je prav 🙂 Mal sem tudi preoblikovala ponekod, tko da napiši kot hočeš.

First travels were difficult, very expensive and very dangerous.Today everything is easier.We can travel by plane, bus, our own car, ship or train. Nowadays there are a lot of travel angencies and travel offers at moderate prices. There are also more advantages of payment, because of the concurence between the agencies.Travels are not so dangerous as they were in past, unless we travel to states where are wars or some another generally known dangers.
People travel for many different reasons. Some want a change,rest,learn foreign language or make a lot of money.
If we travel, we meet a lot of new people, we eat unusual food, get to know other cultures and so on.
I think that in Slovenia are the most visited places: Bled, Bohinj, Šobec, Čateške , Dolenjske toplice.A point of interest ia also Ljubljana, because it is the capital city of Slovenia.
The most populary places in the world are Mediterranean, Alps,American national parks, in Paris Notre Dame, Venice, Hawai and so on.
All people have their own dreams, so I would like to spend my holidays in Hawaii or in Egipt.
People who travel usually don’t like staying in dirty rooms with dirty bathrooms. They all want hotels with parking area, air conditioning, tastefull and big meals.I think that we are very demanding.We cannot exspect brilliance for a little money, but if we pay a lot it is normal that we demand from hotels and agencies all the best.

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